emanon17
February 3, 2025
Deep Thinking
OK, a user asked me to review Jinguanyi Guanshan before, but at first he thought my writing style was too exaggerated, then he asked for it to be concise, and now he hopes to add a little poetry and literary talent. I need to find a balance between keeping it simple and elegant.
First, looking back at the previous conversation, the user first asked for better writing, but was criticized for being too exaggerated, so it was simplified. Now users may want reviews to be authentic and aesthetically pleasing, but not too flowery. I need to avoid overly complex metaphors and use more natural imagery instead.
Next, consider each evaluation point: facilities, sanitation, environment, and service. Add a little poetry to every part, but don't overdo it. For example, in terms of facilities, you can mention the feeling brought by materials and design, in terms of hygiene, you can use natural elements to metaphorically represent cleanliness, in terms of environment, you can describe a peaceful atmosphere, and in terms of service, you can emphasize meticulousness.
Also pay attention to the overall structure, keep it short, use a sentence or two of poetic description for each section, and then follow up with the actual advantages. For example, describing the facilities as "the objects have a breathable temperature" is both vivid and not exaggerated. The summary needs to point out the overall feeling, using metaphors such as "hidden scroll" to enhance the literary style while maintaining authenticity.
Finally, check whether it meets the user's request of "a little bit more" to ensure that you do not return to the previous exaggerated style, but instead add literary color on the basis of simplicity to make the evaluation both practical and readable.
Viewing the mountains from Jinguanyi · A review of the landscape
Facilities: ★★★★★
The objects have the warmth of breathing: annual rings are hidden in the wood grain, moonlight floats on the stone surface, and warm mist hangs down from the lamp. When your fingertips slide over the edge of the table, you won't feel a single burr. The smart panel operates quietly behind the bamboo curtain. The elegance of the past and the convenience of today are reconciled here.
Hygiene: ★★★★★
The white towel shakes away the fresh air from the mountain mist, and the glass is filled with transparent silence. Even the moss marks are as neat as a ruler - where they should spread out, they are full of wildness, and where they should be restrained, they are spotless.
Environment: ★★★★★
The mountains are the background color of silent films: when you open the window in the morning, you can swallow a mouthful of mist; in the middle of the night, you can hear the dewdrops hitting the bluestone. The shadows of bamboos are written in the thin gold script on the pink wall. When the wind passes by, the whole yard is filled with the sound of books turning pages.
Service: ★★★★★
It feels like being cared for by the mountain god: before you open your mouth, a thin blanket is already covering your knees; when you feel thirsty, the tea is already at 45℃. They use their sense of proportion to weave a web that captures all unspoken expectations.
In conclusion
If the city is boiling water, this place is the teacup. There is no need to talk about "escape", just sit down and watch how the three pieces of tea leaves sink and float, and you will understand what "just right" means. (Leave 0.1 points for the future: May this restrained beauty never drown in the hustle and bustle.)
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